Cough cough, in short, since we are good friends, we must never betray.
Not to mention sneaking shots behind the back, backstabbing or something.
Otherwise, what kind of friend is this?
It's better to write from the beginning that they can't see each other, that they can't see each other, and it should be more acceptable.
"Also, writing about two female protagonists falling in love with the male protagonist at the same time is very suspicious of that kind of harem work."
Yukino's evaluation is relatively normal, and this is also the most commented after Kasumigaoka Shiyu released the third volume on the Internet first.
In particular, there were so many comments criticizing her that she was suspected of writing harem essays that she was portrayed in such a way that she was stunned.
"But love is about fighting for it, right?"
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at the girl in front of him strangely.
Isn't Yukinoshita the same?
Knowing that Amano-san has a girlfriend, she even pulled her out to go shopping together.
Still sitting side by side.
Although it is said that it is not a date, but...
Who believes?
Kasumigaoka Shiu felt that if she called Yuigahama Yui over to confront Yukinoshita Yukino face to face, the embarrassing one would definitely be Yukinoshita in front of her.
Only when the identity of a girlfriend is established can it be regarded as the main palace.
Childhood sweethearts are nothing but eternal losers.
"As for the harem, what I write is just ordinary partisan novels."
In the end, the hero can only choose a heroine.
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't feel that what she wrote had anything to do with the so-called "harem".
Can stock trading be called a harem?
"Partisanship?"
Xue Nai pondered for a while before she roughly understood the meaning of this word in the novel.
"However, in fact, the heroine in the book is already wandering between the two heroines... he can be regarded as a scumbag, right? And if you really want to write a normal work, shouldn't the heroine be set up from the beginning? As a person?"
Serious and earnest, Yukinoshita Yukino is implementing her own cognition as always.
"However, my understanding of light novels is not sufficient. The above is just a layman's opinion. Senior sister, please don't worry about it."
"..."
But your evaluation is not like a layman at all...
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu sighed silently in his heart.
Writing a novel without being praised by readers is like a fish walking on the shore out of water.
Sooner or later, the author will be forced into a salted fish.
Could it be that I have no talent for writing novels?
The first volume was well received, the second volume was almost cut in half, and now the third volume has mixed reviews.
Moreover, the use of the "witch video" to achieve mixed reputations, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu already feels a little tired.
"Most of what my senior sister wrote is fine. If the fourth volume comes out, I will buy it."
Seemingly aware of the grayness on Kasumigaoka Shiyu's face, Makoto Amano felt that it would be better to give this young light novel writer a little more encouragement.
Anyway, he is also the future harem writer that he has decided by default. If he is hit enough to give up writing, he has nowhere to look for others.
"Ah."
The next volume, the next volume must silence those who criticize me.
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu silently made up his mind again.
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"The weather is really getting hotter..."
After finally buying Yukihama Yui's birthday gift with Yukino, Amano Makoto returned to Yukinoshita's house a little tired.
Ah, I have to help Yukino test Sister Yang Nai tonight...
Although Amano Makoto didn't feel that Yang Nao really had lily tendencies, but in order to make Yukino feel at ease, he could only sacrifice himself.
Like sleeping in the same bed with Sister Yang Nai tonight or something.
"Brother Amano, something is wrong!"
But as soon as Makoto Amano came home, he ran into his elder sister who was hurriedly running towards him.
What kind of play is sister Yangnai going to play today?
This was Makoto Amano's first thought when he saw Yang Nao's anxious look.
"The air conditioner at home is broken!"
It really is such a "big thing"...
"Wait, the air conditioner is broken?"
Makoto Amano looked at the still hot sun and the steamer-like house.
This is indeed the great event of the great event!
Without air conditioning, I'm afraid they will die of heat today.
"Well, except for the air conditioner in mother's room, which is good, the air conditioners in other rooms are broken..."
As expected, Brother Amano came back to live again today.
Yang Nai had toiled all day today before he broke all the air conditioners.
"What should I do...I also just found out that the air conditioner is broken not long after I got home. Is it still too late to find someone to fix it?"
Although he felt a little guilty, Yang Nai's face was so disguised that there was no expression other than anxiety and worry.
"Only the air conditioner is good in aunt's room?"
Isn't that...
You can sleep with Yang Nai tonight without making excuses?
It really comes with no effort.
Makoto Amano was still a little troubled at first, but now he completely regards the broken air conditioner as good news.
"Yeah, I wonder if we can call someone to fix the air conditioner for us now..."
Yang Nai took out his mobile phone and pretended to be calling the worker who repaired the air conditioner.
"It's so late, even if someone can come to fix it, I don't know when it will be fixed, let's talk about it tomorrow."
Makoto Amano shook his head with a "helpless" face.
"Let's just stay in aunt's room tonight. It's not the first time we've slept in anyway."
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PS: Next, Snowmother or Sayuri may appear (both are very sound general writing methods, don't worry).
However, I'm following the timeline in this book, so it may not necessarily be written in the way that everyone plays a turn in order.
There may be several people writing together or one person writing several rounds.
By the way, add a picture of Mrs. Yubihama.
Chapter 150 A hobby that 90.00% of people have
Mere stinky brother, as expected, I was easily captured by my sister, right?
plan pass.
After finally getting the result he wanted, Yang Nai couldn't help but praise himself in his heart.
Although he had a good dream last night, he didn't actually operate his mouth like before. When he woke up, Yang Nao felt empty and lonely.
Fortunately, today I have the opportunity to do the same thing as the previous few days.
"But brother Amano has slept with his sister so late, is Xiao Yukino really not angry?"
I don't know how the two younger siblings are dating today?
If it wasn't for being full of dog food, Yang Nai wouldn't do such a thing as destroying the air conditioner at home.
"No, she..."
She was scared by you last night, so now she wants me to sleep with you—
I don't know how Sister Yang Nai will react if I say this?
"Although you may be angry, it is force majeure after all. I believe Xue Nai will understand."
Makoto Amano was thinking about what reason he should use tonight to sleep in the same bed with this big sister instead of the floor.
"Why don't you call Xiao Xue Nai here, it's more interesting for three people to sleep together, and if there are two people, I'm always worried that brother Amano will turn into a beast and eat my sister and me~"
What Yang Nai is thinking now is if he can do this and that with Makoto Amano in front of Yukino...
It's exciting to think about.
Hmph, who is Xiao Yukino who showed her affection with brother Amano early in the morning!
____________________
I'm not sorry Xiaoxue Nao.
Yang Nai found a reason for himself with peace of mind.
Besides, she couldn't turn back.
This kind of thing is like an addictive poison. She hasn't been with Makoto Amano for a day now... she feels a little uncomfortable all over her body.
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"what?"
When Xue Nai received the call from Makoto Amano, there were a lot of small question marks above her head.
"Because the air conditioner at home is broken, so you want me to go home and sleep with my sister and you?"
Where does this bandit logic come from?
Xue Nai couldn't believe her ears.
And because of organizing the closet at home, she discovered another amazing thing.
The underwear she brought to Makoto Amano's house was missing one piece.
She quite likes the white lace one.
And it disappeared shortly after I bought it.
"Well, it's mainly because Sister Yang Nai is worried that I will attack her at night. After all, I have slept in her room for several nights, and the frequency is too frequent, which has already made her suspicious."
Makoto Amano does not plan to take a coercive strategy against Yang Nao for the time being.
just in case……
Although the possibility of what happened was very low, now was not the time for him to put all his "chips" on the poker table.
The more critical it is, the more cautious it is.
This is Makoto Amano's principle of doing things.
"really?"
Is my sister already suspicious of Makoto Amano?
Then this shows that it is really impossible for my sister to have any love thoughts for this guy.
Hearing Makoto Amano's description, Yukino felt that she could finally win this bet.
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