Two-dimensional To the Heart

Although he was happy to hear these words, Kaoru Miyazon insisted on seeing what Arima Xiandong wrote instead of hearing his oral story.

"At that time, I can help you see, after all, as a genius girl, I can also help you check it out!" said Kaoru Miyazono.

When his girlfriend said this, he stopped talking, just led the topic elsewhere.

His girlfriend's words are very warm, if time permits, he must go on like this with the girl forever.

No, it's a more intimate relationship than this.

It is difficult to solve the suffering of people's lovesickness just by relying on video calls.

When ten o'clock arrived, Ma Xiandong consciously turned off the video call, although both of them were very reluctant.

At this time, Ma Xiandong had time to take out his mobile phone to have a look.

The time for me to hand over the documents to Megumi Kanano is also not short. It is reasonable to say that the number of words in the writing can be read at most in half an hour.

Kaoru Miyazon wanted to share his thoughts directly with Xiandong Arima, so he didn't reply by email.

What about Kanna Megumi?

In fact, Megumi Kano's evaluation was sent when he was chatting with Kaoru. However, Ma Xiandong was busy talking to Kaoru at the time, so he didn't notice Megumi Kano's email.

Now I see the content of the email, there is no doubt that it is all compliments.

However, because she is a newcomer to light novel reading, Megumi Kanano couldn't comment on the good things in it.

The same goes for Kaoru Miyazono. Although she has read some online novels, it is the first time that she has read light novels.

However, both of them gave good-looking comments, which made Arima Xiandong's heart a little settled.

Even if I know that this idea will never fail, it is difficult to control the tension in my heart.

It's like you have cheating methods that no one knows, and no one will notice.

But cheating is cheating. No matter how good the psychological quality is, there will always be a trace of tension and a sense of virtue.

It's almost like this feeling!

Of course, the evaluations of these two people are only the first hurdle, and they reached their conclusions from the perspective of readers and their girlfriends and sisters.

What really needs to be paid attention to is the evaluation of Izumi Masamune and their people.

Especially the Yamada Goblin, a best-selling writer of the same age who dropped out of school at home, the agreement between them was not forgotten by Ma Xiandong.

To promise someone a condition, no matter how you look at it, it is not something to be happy about.

Even if the fairy Yamada didn't have much bad thoughts, Ma Xiandong felt a little wrong.

After all, I have seen people's clothes and fruits.

Although it was not intentional, but seeing it is seeing it, Ma Xiandong does not want to quibble at this point.

Seeing other people's clothing and fruit body, and then he is in that kind of careless performance.

The girl will be annoyed! Well, no matter how much you use that condition, you can't overdo it.

However, Ma Xiandong also wanted to call injustice.

If he is not so indifferent, should he show a **** idiot?

Things might get worse in this way.

In general, no matter what Arima Xiandong performed, he couldn't escape Yamada Fairy's worries.

Being so worried by a beautiful girl, Arima Xiandong was also under a lot of pressure.

With a slight sigh, Ma Xiandong took out his cell phone and sent Megumi Kanno back to the past email, thanking him for comments and support.

Kano Megumi is also a second time, and at the same time expresses that he strongly looks forward to the follow-up story, and wants to see the plot development behind it immediately.

Arima Xiandong hesitated for a while, then agreed, saying that when he finished writing the first volume, he could let her have a look.

However, he has not forgotten to tell Kanye Hui not to show it to others, because his book is the first step to his reputation!

If there is a series of troubles due to the leaked content, Ma Xiandong will also feel very upset.

Slightly calming his mind, Ma Xiandong began to check the emails sent by Masamune Izumi and others.

"You Ma, you are a genius! This kind of setting connects the date with the big event of saving the world, it is really great! Especially the setting of this first wizard, I like it very much! The follow-up plot is written If you do, please show me! Please!"

"Of course, there are also shortcomings, and that is the problem of writing. I want to come to Mr. Ma to realize that, otherwise he won't ask me for advice. Don't worry! I will do my best to help you, and I will not let this excellent film. The work is ashamed!"

This is the evaluation of Izumi Masamune, and only he, a good old man, would be so passionate about the Arima Xiandong he just met.

"You Ma, your novel is very good! I would like to read the following when I read it, but some places are weird to read. It is here,,, and here, if you can change it, read it It will definitely feel more comfortable. I also know about you. In terms of creativity, I give full marks, but for writing, you still need to practice a lot!"

This is an email from Tomoe Takasago, very polite and pertinent.

Xiandong Arima naturally thanked him, and told him that his bet this time was to improve his writing style and writing style.

Although I haven't met Takasago Tomoe himself, it can be seen from these words that ~www.NovelMTL.com~ is also a very good person.

Tomoe Takasago is also considered a professional. After all, her family opened a bookstore, so Arima Xiandong paid much attention to her opinions.

Izumi Sagiri also sent an email, "Look so good! I love it! If you need illustrations in the future, I mean, if I can, I can... Can I draw illustrations for your novel? But it's amazing!"

The girl's response made Arima Xiandong very happy.

Because I have not seen Izumi Sagiri today, Arima Xiandong thought that Izumi Sagiri's opinions would be conveyed through Izumi Masamune, but she unexpectedly added her email address directly.

It seems that girls really like to read novels very lightly, so when they see excellent works, they take the initiative to draw some illustrations for them.

However, Ma Xiandong didn't know the true level of the girl's illustration, so he didn't immediately agree.

Instead, tell the other person that next time you go to her house, look at her work before making a decision.

For a light novel, illustration is a very important existence.

This is equivalent to a natural beauty, if she can put on makeup, she will directly become an alluring existence.

But if you don’t know how to make up, your beauty will drop by several levels.

Therefore, the illustrations of "Join War" must be carefully considered, and you can't just make promises to others.

Izumi Sagiri also understands this and has no entanglement. She believes that as long as Ma Xiandong sees her work, she will definitely not refuse.

My painting is superb!

This is the confidence of being an illustrator.

But now, only Yamada Fairy has not sent her evaluation, although it is not important anymore, Arima Xiandong has already won.

Thanks to the book friend "Fuhuang" for the reward of 100 starting coins, thank you for your support! !