What should I do if the heroine escapes from the book?
Chapter 83 Peeping at her computer
"Why is this a classical Chinese text? Ah? Why is this a classical Chinese text?" Qiu Wuji grabbed Chu Ge's collar angrily: "This is obviously vernacular, it's just that some parallel prose is used to describe the scene!"
Chu Ge also had a headache.
Let’s talk about classical Chinese, it’s definitely wrong. In fact, her writing style belongs to the ancient vernacular, and the style of the four major classics is also in this type. If you read "Journey to the West", you will be dizzy with so many poems and songs in the first chapter, but in fact, most of the narration and dialogue are quite vernacular. Yes, for now, it can be called a half-literate sentence at most, which is still a bit far from classical Chinese.
Chu Ge was definitely not optimistic about the results of this style, but since he had no expectations for the results, he let her do it.
I didn't expect that I would be beaten back and couldn't even put it in the warehouse.
After all, I am neither an editor nor a review team, and everyone has different review standards.
"In the final analysis, the scenery parallelism in the opening paragraph is too overdone. There is no need to show off so brutally. I can't just write about the majestic green mountains and it's over. You put this 'there is a poem describing this scenery', what's 'the river is so far away, I don't know' Where are the fishermen and woodcutter? The clouds are deep and the mist is deep, and the boy returns vaguely. It's two or three hundred words talking about this. It's unnecessary, it's really unnecessary..."
Qiu Wuji bit his lower lip, looking sad and angry: "I have been thinking about this for a long time! This is also a necessary scenery background. I have read thousands of years of story books, and they all write like this..."
"Emmmm, I've seen it for thousands of years..." Chu Ge scratched his head, it was really hard to say this. The reading memory and writing style that Qiu Wuji has cultivated over the years are deeply ingrained and cannot be changed at will. He has only read a few novels in this world, so it will definitely not cover the ten thousand years of foundation.
"By the way, didn't you deliberately study my writing style at that time?"
"Ah? I went to read a story... Isn't the style of writing like that?" Qiu Wuji sat on the edge of the bed in a daze: "And I also read so many Taoist scriptures and ancient prose, and then I went back..."
"You adapt very quickly to speaking. Why can't you adapt to writing?"
"Speaking is different, it depends on the environment. You can't write like that in writing. You won't write in the book what you said in the group chat, please tell me..."
Chu Ge: "...That's true."
Qiu Wuji felt aggrieved: "Am I going to read like crazy to find a sense of modern writing style?"
"Let's see, if you don't use your own style and deliberately imitate other people's styles, can you do it?"
"Can I try to imitate you?"
"When you post female videos, just imitate the masters of female videos. In fact, female videos also pay attention to beautiful words, but everyone's elegance methods are different. You study it." Chu Ge said: "If you imitate me, then You have to post a male video.”
"What are the main differences between male and female channels? Female protagonists and male protagonists?"
"This is a difference in perspective. In addition, there is also a difference in style orientation. Female channels pay more attention to emotions, while male channels focus more on career. Of course, this is not a generalization. Female channels also have career stories for heroines, and male channels also have love stories. However, The details are still different, the perspective and the way of thinking..."
Qiu Wuji's head got bigger: "Stop, stop, stop..."
Chu Ge had no choice but to say: "Every profession looks simple, and there are many ways to study it. This is like a mountain. You don't even know the difference between men and women. Are you sure you want to write it down?"
Qiu Wuji thought for a while: "Your side is really detailed and has subdivisions for different readers. Our side... Hey, you think, if I don't publish it here, does it count if I publish it over there? ? With my influence, it will be very easy to spread it to the world in ten days... I can also find people who study the way of books to add up..."
Chugo slowly opened his mouth.
If you write a book there, and a world is built in the book, it’s like a baby...
"Shall I give it a try? If it doesn't work, come back and think of a solution." Qiu Wuji said with some embarrassment: "Well, I have stayed long enough this time. How many days will I go back?"
The tone of asking for advice made Chu Ge a little satisfied.
The head of the household!
Chu Ge didn't force it, and patted her on the shoulder: "Go and test it. Although I'm not optimistic about it, I'm quite interested. I hope you can succeed."
Qiu Wuji said nothing, just stared at his hands.
Chugo took it back in embarrassment.
Qiu Wuji pushed him out: "Get out, I'm going back."
Chu Ge then remembered that she was hiding from the bed to shed her clothes when she went back. The thought made her heart tremble, and suddenly said: "Your protagonist's name is really meaningless in that world. How about I change one word?"
Qiu Wuji couldn't keep up with his jumping thoughts, and asked curiously: "What to change?"
Chu Ge turned back and changed one word on the document: "Chu Muchu."
Then he turned around and smiled: "Okay?"
Qiu Wuji stared at his smile blankly, and there was something strange stirring in her heart that she couldn't put into words.
Isn't this Chu Ge's desire for endless love again, he kept saying it in different ways.
snort.
She tilted her head: "Okay, okay, you can write a book. Get out, I'm leaving."
Chu Ge stretched out his hand and grabbed her delicate hand: "In our world, at least a handshake is required to say goodbye."
Qiu Wuji let him hold her hand and was rubbed twice without saying anything.
…………
Qiu Wuji went back.
Chu Ge stood in her room, looking at the computer that he had even forgotten to turn off. He felt that Qiu Wuji's return this time was a bit like fleeing, in a hurry.
As for that, I won’t lift your quilt.
Chu Ge smelled the fragrance in his hand, his eyes fell on the computer document, and he fell into deep thought.
In my own setting, the way of books in that world is definitely not up to the level of creation, far from it. Such monks can summon some book spirits, or use the characteristics of words to achieve certain types of spell effects. is the limit.
Even in the expected conception, the ascended heaven cannot create the world through the way of books. This kind of method that belongs to the supreme creation is either owned by the protagonist or only available to those at the final BOSS level, but it does not exist in the setting of this book at all.
Qiu Wuji wanted to create a nesting doll when she went back, but she probably couldn't do it. She couldn't break through the limitations of the world.
So the matryoshka doll issue can be put aside. What Chu Ge is really thinking about is that Qiu Wuji did not write a book in his book, so what is the nature of her going back to write a book now and spread it to the world?
This will definitely have some impact and change on the world...but it should not affect the direction of the plot. Will there be any problems with this level of change?
This is also a test part.
I don't know if Qiu Wuji thought about this level... Judging from the way she ran away, she probably didn't.
Chugo felt like a concerned parent.
Well...parents have to do their own thing! Chu Ge looked around like a thief, then sat in front of the computer and opened Qiu Wuji's hard drive and browser.
Which car did you look at last time, and what weird things did you search for every day, let dad see it?
Well... the car is here...
Chu Ge clicked it and took a look, almost throwing the mouse away.
This TM is actually a film about a male being beaten and trained with a whip!
No wonder her reaction that day was not as intense as expected. Instead, her eyes looked up and down, which was extremely weird... So that's it!
Even though I wasn’t beaten in the first place! But this is not a good thing, my day!
And I’ve never seen such a car before!
Chu Ge was so angry that he almost vomited blood and opened the group chat on his mobile phone: "Whoever gave Sect Master Qiu the M car that day, stand up and die!"
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