"Your first sentence, the flowers in spring take away the breath of winter."
"I understand what you mean, but do you think this is better--"
Lin Xun said as he rewrote the original sentence.
"The flowers in spring take away the ice in winter."
"And I think the tone needs to be changed like this, the flowers in spring take away the ice in winter."
"There needs to be an intermittent pause in the middle to separate them."
After the change, Lin Xun hummed softly:
"The flowers in spring take away the ice in winter,"
"The spring breeze brings a romantic breath,"
"......"
After humming, Lin Xun looked at Yan Ruoli: "What do you think?"
"Well...it's indeed much better."
Just changing a few words really makes the artistic conception of the lyrics rise a lot.
"Most of the lyrics in the back are fine, and the second paragraph can also use this word for the repetition cycle."
Lin Xun looked at the lyrics in the second half carefully.
"Now, you and I, hand in hand,"
"Go forward together,"
"Run to the end of happiness--"
"Well, I think this paragraph can be changed to this."
Lin Xun began to write on the manuscript again:
"Now, you and I, hand in hand,"
"Go forward together,"
"Towards a happy future--"
"In fact, I think since it is the words used in the wedding scene, it should be as simple, happy, and happy as possible. This kind of lyrics makes everyone very familiar, and the sense of substitution comes up immediately."
Lin Xun analyzed it clearly.
No wonder!
Yan Ruoli nodded. It turned out that she wanted to draw a clear line with popular songs too much. In the songs she created before, basically there was some depth, which would increase everyone's desire to listen to them repeatedly.
But in fact, the most important thing about the wedding scene is not this song. This song is just a foil. The simple and happy style can set off the heavy drama prepared by the protagonist, such as wearing rings and making promises to each other.
"The last sentence is a bit wrong. 'Running to the end of happiness' sounds like happiness has come to an end this time, but changing it to 'Running to a happy future' makes it seem like marriage is just the beginning of happiness, which can increase people's expectations for the future."
"Maybe I said it a bit confusingly, but the general meaning is like this. I don't know if you can understand it."
Lin Xun put the pencil on the table, and then picked up the manuscript paper and went through it as a whole.
"Okay, that's about it, what do you think?"
Taking the draft paper handed over by Lin Xun, Yan Ruoli's eyes fell on the fonts he had modified.
The font has sharp strokes and strong strokes, like cast iron, yet elegant, giving people a shocking sense of beauty.
Yan Ruoli was shocked in her heart. These words did not look like they were written by a dying person.
The font is very neat, quietly arranged under the originally twisted lyrics, with a strange sense of beauty.
"Well... it's really good..."
"Lin Xun, thank you, you are really great."
Yan Ruoli praised from the bottom of her heart, and then carefully put the manuscript into the interlayer of her bag.
"Dong Dong"
There was a knock on the door.
"Excuse me, your set meal is ready."
The uniformed waiter came in with a large iron plate in his hand, and there were various dishes on the plate.
"Please be careful, I'm going to serve the dishes."
After that, the waiter skillfully placed the dishes on the plate on the table one by one.
Lin Xun thought that he could eat after the dishes were placed, but after the waiter put down the iron tray, he took out two long white candles from his bag and placed them on the table...
Wait!
Why does it feel like something is wrong?
Why light candles for a meal?
Yan Ruoli, who was sitting opposite, was obviously unaware of it, and her face was also puzzled.
After the two candles were lit, the waiter took out two roses from the bag, and then tore off the petals and sprinkled them on the table...
"No, can I ask what you are doing?"
Lin Xun was a little speechless. Why is the atmosphere of a meal so weird?
It's like that.
Oh, right, candlelight dinner!
Lin Xun remembered.
"Isn't this the Love Stronger Than Gold Set Meal that you two chose? Please enjoy."
The waiter smiled and set the table, then gently pushed the door of the private room.
"Love Stronger Than Gold Set Meal?"
Yan Ruoli's face was now red as if it was about to bleed, and she wished she could find a crack in the ground to quickly crawl into.
When she looked at the set meal just now, she only paid attention to the price, and she really didn't look at the name of the set meal carefully..
"I... I don't know... Lin Xun, don't misunderstand..."
"Click"
Just after he finished speaking, the lights in the box were turned off. Without thinking too much, it must have been done by the waiter outside. Only the faint light of the candle was flickering on the scene.
The atmosphere became more subtle.
The two looked at each other, and couldn't say a word for a long time.
"I understand, um, I'll go turn on the lights..."
The atmosphere was really too awkward. Just as Lin Xun was about to get up, he heard singing from under the table.
"Dear, fly slowly~"
"Be careful of the rose with thorns in front~"
"Dear~"
"......"
The atmosphere instantly rose to another level of awkwardness.
There was a small speaker under the table, which seemed to have been placed in the restaurant a long time ago, probably to set off this environment.
From the perspective of couples, the restaurant is indeed very good, but from the perspective of Lin Xun and others, it was so embarrassing.
Also, even if you want to play love songs, can you play another song?
This song is from decades ago and it's still playing!
"Well, I'll go out and find a waiter!"
Lin Xun hurriedly opened the door and went out.
After a few minutes, Lin Xun came in, followed by the waiter.
She looked at the two people with an apologetic face: "I'm really sorry, I misunderstood, I will remove these things immediately..."
The candles were quickly taken away, the lights returned to normal, and the speakers under the table returned to normal.
Except for the rose petals scattered on the table.
After this, the two of them no longer had the heart to eat.
Yan Ruoli, who had just shouted that she was very hungry, also lost her appetite.
Lin Xun buried his head in eating, while Yan Ruoli ate while looking at the phone to cover up the embarrassment.
"Well, I'm full, you eat slowly..."
Yan Ruoli picked up the paper towel on the table and wiped the corners of her mouth, then took out a sketch from her bag and looked at it.
"Hmm..."
Lin Xun also saw that Yan Ruoli was trying to hide her embarrassment, so he also sped up his eating speed, eating quickly and leaving quickly!
Lin Xun was full in a few minutes, and when he was about to get up and tell Yan Ruoli that he was ready to leave, his eyes were focused on the sketch in Yan Ruoli's hand.
The yellow-white light above his head shone through the sketch, and the shadow was reflected on the table.
Lin Xun's pupils contracted instantly, and his eyes widened!
"Where did you get this painting!?"
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