because i have money

Chapter 29 Discussion about the plot and the hero and heroine

I have been reading book reviews myself, and I saw that some readers think that this book has no plot, is too realistic and not very enjoyable to watch.

I think he's quite right.

A novel at a certain point now basically sets goals, then creates conflicts, and resolves conflicts, so as to achieve tension and drama, and promote the progress of the plot.

I really wanted to write like this, but I really can't do it.

Why, because the premise book must have a main line, so you can play like this.Numerous small goals are advanced layer by layer, and finally reach the end point to complete the great harmony of life.

My book doesn't even have an outline, and there is a gross main line.

Basically, it is based on the character of the protagonist and the reality, speculate on what may happen to him, and then write down.

So it is normal for readers to say that it is too realistic, because in a sense this is Zhou Kun's diary.

In reality, if you have the same money-making ability as him, and then do the same thing, the result should be similar.

It’s nothing more than the difference in the speed of the overthrow, and I can’t be 100% realistic, otherwise the female employee Wang Pin would not be able to have a boo with him, and the two girls from JW Marriott would not be overthrown so quickly.But it is nothing more than a matter of time.

If you really want to look forward to the plot, at least wait until the protagonist’s career starts and get in touch with a wider range of people and things. For example, as a venture capitalist, you can get in touch with various entrepreneurial teams and invest in some interesting cases.

Do blockchain and Internet, and then go bragging with Papa Ma, go to Zhihu to answer questions with ponyma, go to MBA with Gou Dongliu, and go to female college students together.

And the spoiler is that there will be a very interesting person in the book, who is also the protagonist of a realistic novel at a certain point. The timeline of that novel happens to be similar to this book. I am going to let Zhou Kun vote for that man main item.

As for now, it's just drinking, eating, and playing with women, and by the way, wretched development.How much can you expect the protagonist to have, once he has money, he will leave the vulgar interests and become a noble person to change the world?
Unrealistic.

Speaking of this, let me talk about the character design of the male protagonist by the way, it is very simple, he is an ordinary person.Calling him a dick, I'm just making fun of him.

Labeling is inherently boring and one-sided.

If you want to call him a dick, in fact, you are not a dick yourself, I am also a dick, why should a dick make things difficult for a dick.

If you want to be realistic, the character design will actually change, because people are inherently a very complicated thing.

There is rarely a pure good guy or a pure bad guy, everyone has a bright side, and everyone has a disgusting side.

If you want to write comprehensively, it is actually quite awkward, because it is not easy to write features when you are tired of writing.It's better to set an interesting template and then keep applying it. I also like to watch this kind of thing, such as the male protagonist of a certain water bird.

But this kind of writing is too boring. I write books for my own pleasure, so I slowly push the hero to experience different people and things. I don’t know what kind of person will come out in the end.

That's fun.

As for the heroine, I don't want to push her as a good girl to the current hero. There's no need to describe too much about her, and she will be changed soon anyway.

The male protagonist can't meet any good girls in his current life.

In addition to hotel restaurants and nightclubs every day, what kind of good girls can you meet?

The one where I know I'm a good girl even though I'm drinking, dancing, tattooing and promiscuous?

What's the difference between this and looking for gold in a cesspit? Even if he meets him, the girl will be ruined in the end.

Now Zhou Kun is not capable of love. I saw an answer on Zhihu a few days ago and said it was pretty good.

The topic is【Why do I feel that the relationship between young people has become more tense recently】

The answer is Dake, and there is a passage in it that says: "They are like two hamsters locked in a cage. Their fast-paced life and soaring prices make the space in the cage smaller and smaller, forcing them to Constantly running around the cage.

Running, she complained that he stepped on her feet, he explained that she squeezed him first, she said being with him was exhausting, and he said that being with you was not easy for me.

So they began to complain and quarrel with each other, thinking that the existence of the other party was the reason for their misfortune in life. If the other party was considerate of themselves, he/she would definitely leave enough space for me.

But they didn't realize that it was because the cage was getting smaller and smaller that they were so cramped. "

Zhou Kun is also a hamster, but fortunately, his space has become wider than ever. It's just that he hasn't realized this deeply yet, and he doesn't know that sharing is also a kind of strength.

Not only money, but also emotions. A purely self-centered person cannot appreciate the beauty of emotions.

If he always thinks that the relationship between men and women is the exchange of money and sex, then he will never have a good relationship in his life.

Even if he meets a good girl, he will not cherish it, because he feels that he has money and has many choices, and he will not cherish it if he has not lost it.

It takes time and an opportunity to change. It is possible that he will never find that opportunity in his entire life, or he may be lucky enough to meet it.

(End of this chapter)