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Chapter 19 "Missing" is over.
Chapter 19 "Missing" is over.
As soon as it was daylight, Fourth Master Su set off with seven people.
In the early winter of Dahuangling, the cold wind is bitter, and it hurts when it blows on the face.
Eight people walked in the snow, revealing footprints of different shades one after another.
When it was almost noon, Li Mazi looked at the gloomy sky and felt a little anxious.
He asked Fourth Master Su: "Fourth Master, how far is it?"
Fourth Master Su turned his head:
"Walk through the meadow below, and turn over a mountain, and you will arrive at the general base. Then we will be able to see Commissar Yang."
When Li Mazi heard it, his face immediately turned pale, and he said with a trembling voice, "Caotianzi? There is a swamp, and no one has ever walked out of it alive..."
Fourth Master Su curled his lips, and said disapprovingly: "There has never been anyone? Every time I see Political Commissar Yang, I pass here. I know there is a secret passage inside."
Although the weather was very cold, Li Mazi's forehead was covered with sweat. I don't know if it was caused by walking for a long time, or what.
Fourth Master Su continued: "It's okay if you don't want to go here, but when we get to the headquarters, Political Commissar Yang and the others may have moved again."
Li Mazi frowned anxiously, and he glanced at the Sanjiang man.
The Sanjiang people gave Li Mazi a hard look.
Li Mazi trembled, and quickly said, "Okay, then let's go to Caodianzi."
Fourth Master Su let out a sigh of relief.
In the end, Fourth Master Su led seven people into the meadow that no one had walked through for a hundred years...
…………
Devil's Kwantung Army records: In 1937, the Noda Second Assassination Squad led by Nagashima Sawada disappeared in the Dahuangling area while carrying out the task of assassinating Commissar Yang of the Fifth Squad.
The local county chronicle records: In the winter of 1937, Su Jing, a traffic officer of the fifth team, disappeared in the Dahuangling area. He was male, aged 32, and was from Sanjiang, Sichuan and Sichuan.
…………
When Su Jing withdrew from the novel world, he had an unexpected look on his face.
This "Missing" is a short novel.He had only glanced at the Huaxia Daily before, but he didn't read it.
However, the protagonist of that novel is Mr. Li.
And just after passing through the novel world, Su Jing discovered the subtlety of this novel.
At the beginning of the chapter, the suspense is drawn out with crackling gunshots, so that readers have a desire to read on.
But this alone is not enough.
The finishing touch is that the gunshots spread to the protagonist's feet!
In novels, when it comes to the safety of the protagonist, it is easy to raise the reader's heart. As long as the description is good, the reader is easily immersed in it.
Obviously, the author of "Missing" has excellent description skills!
Immediately afterwards, the plot is linked together.
In the previous novel, it was written that Fourth Master Su wanted to recruit people from Baiyun Village, but was rejected.
This is equivalent to a resistance set by the author at the beginning.
And when the gunshots spread, after Fourth Master Su escaped with a few "undercover agents" in his first reaction, the novel ushered in the first small cool point.
The failure of the previous recruiting was a resistance, but it was a small point of comfort for a few undercover agents to join the anti-Japanese army.
But because this is a physical book category, the arrangement of resistance is not particularly strong, so the burst of refreshment here is not particularly great.
Even so, this has become the most important stroke of the novel!
The feeling of satisfaction is generally the sense of comfort that readers feel after the protagonist has grown up smoothly.
Among them, the sense of substitution is very emphasized. If the sense of substitution is strong, the readers will be happier, and vice versa.
The author of this novel does the opposite.
He arranged the feeling of refreshment as a foreshadowing - a tool for several undercover agents to assassinate Commissar Yang.
When the reader sees the ending, there will be a strong contrast, which will not only not have a bad effect, but will strongly impact the reader's thinking and make the reader suddenly realize.
After that, the author planted the first foreshadowing about undercover.
The accent of Sanjiang people.
In fact, there are two hints here.
The accent is one, and the other is that there is no Sanjiang in Hebei, only Sichuan and Shu have Sanjiang.
So it shows that the undercover agent is not only someone who claims to be from Sanjiang, but also Li Mazi who has a good relationship with the head of the family.
This point, given by the author at the end of the article, further impacts the habitual thinking formed by readers.
After this series of foreshadowing, the author once again planted a blockbuster.
The dream talk of seven people in their sleep.
All the previous foreshadowings are revealed here, but the author does not directly point it out, but uses suspense to let readers continue reading.
Finally, the climax of the whole novel comes.
Based on Li Mazi's question, Caodianzi is an extremely dangerous place.
And the description of Fourth Master Su's actions, from the side but accurately reveals that Fourth Master Su's heart is not calm, and vaguely points out the main reason why he brought these seven people to Caodianzi.
Many side descriptions in the novel may not cause too much psychological fluctuation when you see it for the first time.
But when the final record appears, the impact of that sense of reality mixed with fiction is beyond words.
Only then will readers suddenly realize and understand the good intentions of the previous author.
In general, no matter how you understand it, this novel is a rare masterpiece!
Su Jing's heart is very restless. If one day, he can reach this point, I'm afraid he can even try to enter the physical book industry.
At this time, the system finally made a sound:
"The host has performed well in the novel world, please continue to work hard! Please write all the plots of the book. Requirements: The clarity of the plot exceeds 80%, and the difference in the number of words cannot exceed 500 words."
The requirements this time are different from the previous ones, and the requirements for plot clarity have increased by 10%.
Su Jing guessed that the system was automatically upgraded because his level had improved.
As for the word count requirement, Su Jing thought it was normal.
This is a short novel, and the length and punctuation may be less than 3000 words. If the word limit is still within 20000 words, isn’t it nonsense? .
White paper was already placed on the table, Su Jing habitually drew up a small outline in his mind, and then began to "code".
…………
"Host Potential:
Elementary Writing (73/100)
Elementary level of plot mastery ability (42/100)
Character description ability (49/100)
Novel Situation Mastery (21/100)
Wenhao progress 0.1%
In general, 41% of the writers surpassed Singularity Chinese website. "
Seeing the slightly distorted small characters floating in front of his eyes, Su Jing was very satisfied.
Since getting the system, Su Jing's progress has been faster and faster under the system's training.
I still remember that when I first got the system, Su Jing's level was only the bottom-level author of Qidian's Chinese website. Now, Su Jing is almost more than half of the authors of Qidian.
But in fact, in Su Jing's view, this is only a small step.
There are hundreds of thousands of writers in Qidian, and among them, writers with a playful mentality account for a large proportion.
The part of Su Jingchao's authors is actually a large part of the kind of authors who are used to eunuchs and have no potential.
In the future, Su Jing knew that it would definitely be more difficult to surpass other authors.
(End of this chapter)
As soon as it was daylight, Fourth Master Su set off with seven people.
In the early winter of Dahuangling, the cold wind is bitter, and it hurts when it blows on the face.
Eight people walked in the snow, revealing footprints of different shades one after another.
When it was almost noon, Li Mazi looked at the gloomy sky and felt a little anxious.
He asked Fourth Master Su: "Fourth Master, how far is it?"
Fourth Master Su turned his head:
"Walk through the meadow below, and turn over a mountain, and you will arrive at the general base. Then we will be able to see Commissar Yang."
When Li Mazi heard it, his face immediately turned pale, and he said with a trembling voice, "Caotianzi? There is a swamp, and no one has ever walked out of it alive..."
Fourth Master Su curled his lips, and said disapprovingly: "There has never been anyone? Every time I see Political Commissar Yang, I pass here. I know there is a secret passage inside."
Although the weather was very cold, Li Mazi's forehead was covered with sweat. I don't know if it was caused by walking for a long time, or what.
Fourth Master Su continued: "It's okay if you don't want to go here, but when we get to the headquarters, Political Commissar Yang and the others may have moved again."
Li Mazi frowned anxiously, and he glanced at the Sanjiang man.
The Sanjiang people gave Li Mazi a hard look.
Li Mazi trembled, and quickly said, "Okay, then let's go to Caodianzi."
Fourth Master Su let out a sigh of relief.
In the end, Fourth Master Su led seven people into the meadow that no one had walked through for a hundred years...
…………
Devil's Kwantung Army records: In 1937, the Noda Second Assassination Squad led by Nagashima Sawada disappeared in the Dahuangling area while carrying out the task of assassinating Commissar Yang of the Fifth Squad.
The local county chronicle records: In the winter of 1937, Su Jing, a traffic officer of the fifth team, disappeared in the Dahuangling area. He was male, aged 32, and was from Sanjiang, Sichuan and Sichuan.
…………
When Su Jing withdrew from the novel world, he had an unexpected look on his face.
This "Missing" is a short novel.He had only glanced at the Huaxia Daily before, but he didn't read it.
However, the protagonist of that novel is Mr. Li.
And just after passing through the novel world, Su Jing discovered the subtlety of this novel.
At the beginning of the chapter, the suspense is drawn out with crackling gunshots, so that readers have a desire to read on.
But this alone is not enough.
The finishing touch is that the gunshots spread to the protagonist's feet!
In novels, when it comes to the safety of the protagonist, it is easy to raise the reader's heart. As long as the description is good, the reader is easily immersed in it.
Obviously, the author of "Missing" has excellent description skills!
Immediately afterwards, the plot is linked together.
In the previous novel, it was written that Fourth Master Su wanted to recruit people from Baiyun Village, but was rejected.
This is equivalent to a resistance set by the author at the beginning.
And when the gunshots spread, after Fourth Master Su escaped with a few "undercover agents" in his first reaction, the novel ushered in the first small cool point.
The failure of the previous recruiting was a resistance, but it was a small point of comfort for a few undercover agents to join the anti-Japanese army.
But because this is a physical book category, the arrangement of resistance is not particularly strong, so the burst of refreshment here is not particularly great.
Even so, this has become the most important stroke of the novel!
The feeling of satisfaction is generally the sense of comfort that readers feel after the protagonist has grown up smoothly.
Among them, the sense of substitution is very emphasized. If the sense of substitution is strong, the readers will be happier, and vice versa.
The author of this novel does the opposite.
He arranged the feeling of refreshment as a foreshadowing - a tool for several undercover agents to assassinate Commissar Yang.
When the reader sees the ending, there will be a strong contrast, which will not only not have a bad effect, but will strongly impact the reader's thinking and make the reader suddenly realize.
After that, the author planted the first foreshadowing about undercover.
The accent of Sanjiang people.
In fact, there are two hints here.
The accent is one, and the other is that there is no Sanjiang in Hebei, only Sichuan and Shu have Sanjiang.
So it shows that the undercover agent is not only someone who claims to be from Sanjiang, but also Li Mazi who has a good relationship with the head of the family.
This point, given by the author at the end of the article, further impacts the habitual thinking formed by readers.
After this series of foreshadowing, the author once again planted a blockbuster.
The dream talk of seven people in their sleep.
All the previous foreshadowings are revealed here, but the author does not directly point it out, but uses suspense to let readers continue reading.
Finally, the climax of the whole novel comes.
Based on Li Mazi's question, Caodianzi is an extremely dangerous place.
And the description of Fourth Master Su's actions, from the side but accurately reveals that Fourth Master Su's heart is not calm, and vaguely points out the main reason why he brought these seven people to Caodianzi.
Many side descriptions in the novel may not cause too much psychological fluctuation when you see it for the first time.
But when the final record appears, the impact of that sense of reality mixed with fiction is beyond words.
Only then will readers suddenly realize and understand the good intentions of the previous author.
In general, no matter how you understand it, this novel is a rare masterpiece!
Su Jing's heart is very restless. If one day, he can reach this point, I'm afraid he can even try to enter the physical book industry.
At this time, the system finally made a sound:
"The host has performed well in the novel world, please continue to work hard! Please write all the plots of the book. Requirements: The clarity of the plot exceeds 80%, and the difference in the number of words cannot exceed 500 words."
The requirements this time are different from the previous ones, and the requirements for plot clarity have increased by 10%.
Su Jing guessed that the system was automatically upgraded because his level had improved.
As for the word count requirement, Su Jing thought it was normal.
This is a short novel, and the length and punctuation may be less than 3000 words. If the word limit is still within 20000 words, isn’t it nonsense? .
White paper was already placed on the table, Su Jing habitually drew up a small outline in his mind, and then began to "code".
…………
"Host Potential:
Elementary Writing (73/100)
Elementary level of plot mastery ability (42/100)
Character description ability (49/100)
Novel Situation Mastery (21/100)
Wenhao progress 0.1%
In general, 41% of the writers surpassed Singularity Chinese website. "
Seeing the slightly distorted small characters floating in front of his eyes, Su Jing was very satisfied.
Since getting the system, Su Jing's progress has been faster and faster under the system's training.
I still remember that when I first got the system, Su Jing's level was only the bottom-level author of Qidian's Chinese website. Now, Su Jing is almost more than half of the authors of Qidian.
But in fact, in Su Jing's view, this is only a small step.
There are hundreds of thousands of writers in Qidian, and among them, writers with a playful mentality account for a large proportion.
The part of Su Jingchao's authors is actually a large part of the kind of authors who are used to eunuchs and have no potential.
In the future, Su Jing knew that it would definitely be more difficult to surpass other authors.
(End of this chapter)
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