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Chapter 147 The first story created by Ding Rui

Chapter 147 Ding Rui's First Story

When Song Song and Ding Rui went to work during the day, although Song Ben stayed at his residence, he did not sit idle. Instead, he called several manufacturing suppliers to inquire about the prices of manufactured parts.

These suppliers are located all over the country, and the way they quote prices varies.

Some of them quote as a whole, according to the total weight of the manufactured parts, multiplied by an empirical manufacturing coefficient to get the final price; some quotes by category, one price for pipe fittings, one price for non-standard parts, and one price for warehouses; there are also classifications More detailed, you need to see the drawings of the manufactured parts, and then quote each product individually.

Song Ben didn't know much about these things, so he didn't bargain. He just recorded the quotation of each supplier.

Hearing Song Song's question, Song Ben took out a piece of paper and handed it over.

Song Song unfolded the paper, carefully looked at it from the beginning to the end, nodded slightly and said: "The overall quotation is not too different, but it should be higher than the price I know."

"Can you bargain?" Song Ben asked, "I didn't bargain today. I just wrote down what they said it was."

Song Song shook his head and said: "The price may not be easy to cut, we can't compare with Zhengshang, our demand is too small, and it is not attractive to these suppliers. There will be more projects in the future, and there may be more talks. I'm afraid it will not be easy now .But then again, I don’t expect them to do it for us for the time being.”

"What do you mean? I asked in vain?"

"Of course it's not a white question. With their quotations, we can analyze the market conditions and then suppress the quotations given by the design institute."

Since the Sanzhen Design Institute can package production and installation, it must have their own suppliers and installation team resources.

Song Song spent so much effort to get the supplier list from Tubie, one is for the sake of the long-term, and the other is to understand the market conditions and avoid being slaughtered by the design institute.

"In the next few days, you don't have to be busy with other things, just call all these suppliers and installation teams, find out the prices and write them down, and that's it."

"Okay!" Song Ben agreed very simply this time.

At first, he was a little scared when he called people. Today, when he made the call, he no longer felt scared at all. He had everything under control and was able to do it with ease.

"By the way, Brother Daben, I'll go to your room to squeeze in tonight. Ding Rui is writing, and it's probably going to be very late. I'm worried that my snoring while sleeping will affect her."

Song Ben smiled and said, "You are really careful with your siblings!"

Song Ben shook his hands twice: "It's so-so, this is a routine operation."

So, on this night, the two brothers Song Ben and Song Song huddled together on the same bed, snoring each other as if talking to each other, and fell asleep in the sound of each other's snoring.

Sure enough, Ding Rui, as Song Song guessed, kept writing until very late in a state of ecstasy, and finished writing the story after one o'clock in the morning, and it has not yet been transformed into a script.

She was satisfied with the content of the story, but she always felt as if something was missing.

But she couldn't tell what exactly was missing.

Ding Rui felt that it was necessary for her to send the story to Dai Xin first. If there was no problem, it would not be too late to convert the script.

The next day, Dai Xin read Ding Rui's new story, smiled and gave Ding Rui a thumbs up: "Xiao Rui, this story is great!"

Ding Rui was very excited after being recognized: "Really? That's great!"

Dai Xin said with a pleased tone: "I have been focusing on the love triangle plot before and basically wrote everything I could. I was worried at first that your ideas would be restricted. Unexpectedly, you are more spiritual than I expected." Tell me, how did you come up with this plot?"

Ding Rui said truthfully: "Actually, I was really limited by my thinking at the beginning. I wrote many editions, but I was not satisfied with them all. My mentality almost collapsed. It was my husband who told me to retreat and make the three of them The relationship between them was disrupted and reorganized, which gave me a new way of thinking. I tried to make Li Dalei and Xu Ze stand together, let Lin Jingjing and Li Dalei sing opposite scenes, and then find a suitable relationship between the characters, and the plot will come out naturally. gone."

In the new story written by Ding Rui, Li Dalei and Xu Ze are very close brothers, and Lin Jingjing is Xu Ze's current wife.

Li Dalei behaved with a naughty air, giving people the impression that he was not a serious person, and he would come here whenever he encountered troubles and asked Xu Ze to borrow money very rudely.

Every time Xu Ze lends money to Li Dalei without saying a word, this arouses extreme dissatisfaction from his wife Lin Jingjing.

Because of Li Dalei's borrowing of money, Lin Jingjing and Xu Ze often quarreled, and the relationship between husband and wife was affected.

Finally, one day, Xu Ze's business suffered a setback and he urgently needed a sum of money to save it, but he borrowed it all over the place, but he couldn't get it.

Lin Jingjing had a big quarrel with Xu Ze and asked Xu Ze, there are so many brothers in normal times, how come when they really need help, those brothers disappeared?

At this time, Xu Ze received a transfer of 80 yuan, and a message from Li Dalei: Brother, 20 yuan is for you, and 60 yuan is for lending you, so we can carry it together!

This money came from Li Dalei who mortgaged his house to the bank.

This story is not too long, but it is very close to reality, and it involves the sensitive topic of "borrowing money". Coupled with the romantic ending twist, every character comes alive in such a short space.

However, there is a problem here.

Dai Xin read the story over and over again, the smile on her face gradually faded away, but her brows slowly frowned: "Xiao Rui, I overlooked a key issue just now, I don't know if you have thought about it?"

"What's the problem?" Ding Rui's heart suddenly hung up.

Dai Xin said: "You didn't write about your own role in this. There is a strong continuity in this story. Wherever you add Sister Moon's role, it will split the plot, it will appear very abrupt, and affect the viewing experience. "

Hearing this, Ding Rui suddenly realized what it was that he always felt was lacking.

"Then... shall I write a new one, or adjust the plot?" Ding Rui was a little anxious.

Dai Xin shook her head, frowned and fell into deep thought. After coming over for a while, she said, "Well, let's start with your work and reduce your role appropriately. After I leave, you have too many things to be responsible for, and you must have Make a trade-off, or you won’t be able to do well in any aspect.”

"Uh... what do you mean?"

"I mean, you start with this short video, you just play a relatively simple role like a passer-by, and you focus on the work of management, directing and screenwriting. Of course, this may be a bit risky, and it may cause fans I’m not used to it and object to it, but I think it’s worth a try. Otherwise, you won’t be able to carry it in the future!”

Ding Rui nodded slightly, agreeing to Dai Xin's suggestion: "Okay! Then I'll try it!"

(End of this chapter)

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