The Comprehensive Story of Hiki Valley Hachiman

Somehow I've neglected to maintain my bike since Komachi wasn't on it.

Since the error cannot be recovered, we can only find a way to remedy it.

I remember that there is a car repair shop next to a station near the school.

So, I pushed the bicycle with the chain off, and made a jingling sound, and walked towards the station.

Fortunately, at this point in time, the car repair shop is not closed yet.

In other words, the door was always open because it was a car repair shop.

After taking the bike into the shop and watching the mechanic fiddle with it, I got another sad news.

It seems that the gears are worn out, or the freewheel body is loose for some reason, and needs to be replaced.

It will take about an hour or so.

However, it seems that the car repairer saw that I was a student, and agreed that I could put the bicycle here first, and then pick it up after it is repaired tomorrow.

My bike is such a bargain that no one would want to steal it.

What's more, his shop is here.

It's not worth it to pack up and leave for a broken bicycle of mine.

After leaving contact information with him and confirming that he is the owner of the shop, I readily agreed to the proposal.

Not to mention the troubles that the family will encounter at the party, just say that the money in my wallet now may not be enough to pay for the car repair.

After thanking him, I went to the station next to me.

Nowadays, the road leading to the station is almost reserved.

There were only a few people on the small platform that was crowded with students from the Sobu Union High School when school was just over.

Among them, I inadvertently found someone's figure.

A girl standing awe-inspiring at one end of the platform.She exudes an air of refusal to engage with her surroundings.The cord of the earphones dangled from the ears and extended into the pocket of the school uniform jacket.

It's Mai Sakurajima.

The side face bathed in the setting sun has a sad beauty, but it is as beautiful as a painting even though it is just standing there.

I'm not in the mood to appreciate that right now, though.

Standing as far away as possible, I watched her alone.

Even though it is as far away as possible, it is still in the same station.

However, even in her current state of standing alone in a daze, she can't find me.

"By the way, is she coming to school today?"

Although Sakurajima Mai is also a student of this school.

However, because of her special status as an artist, the school gave her greater rights.It's not uncommon to miss school for a week or two because of something.

Therefore, even though all the students in this school knew about her, few of them had seen her with their own eyes.

In other words, in her current state, can others still see it?

In other words, did you dare to openly appear in a crowded public place like a tram stop just because you didn't notice it?

If she hadn't been seen all this time, how would she have spent these two days?

At this time, two college student couples who looked like tourists came to answer my questions.

"Hey, that"

"Sure enough, it's her, right?"

The couple who came to the middle of the platform immediately noticed Mai's existence.

The sound of their pointing and whispering conversation came over.I don't know if Mai has noticed, but she is still facing the direction of the track.

"Huh~? That's not good~"

"It's okay, isn't a celebrity the most willing to be photographed? Someone can take a sneak shot to prove that she is famous."

"And this is Mai Sakurajima~! Presumably with this photo as proof, many people around me will be envious of me meeting such a big star!"

The boy held up his smartphone, and the girl made a coquettish sound without any intention of stopping it.Their chattering conversations seemed harsh in the silent station.

Alas~ Is it another idiot like this?

So, it is because there are many people like this that the world is so bad.

If it is some teenagers or some middle-aged people, it is fine. After all, one is immature, and the other is the lack of a good educational environment and excessive pressure.

But no matter how you look at it, you are all well-educated and the most free and happy period.

Don't you even know this bit of common sense?

Candid photography is illegal.

However, it is also because the current rights protection methods are too complicated that many such people are condoned.

And, if you really want to take a sneak shot, just give me some sneaky shots.

So upright, do you want to show off to others?

I really don't know how they got into college.

However, as usual, I don't care about this kind of thing.

As long as it doesn't get in my way, you can do whatever you want.

However, for today...

You are really getting in my way.

Because, at this time, the system issued a task.

[System task: Solve Mai Sakurajima's troubles]

Is it such an unknown mission again?

It seems that I still need to investigate it myself.

Because of the task of the system, I already want to know the situation.

It seems that this time I have to take the initiative.

"Crack!"

It was the camera sound of the mobile phone, and I deliberately turned it up to the maximum.

"Lucky! Looks like I took a good photo~"

I exaggerated so loudly on purpose.

Not only the couple of college students, but even the three students from Zongwu High School on the platform cast strange glances at me.

As for Mai Sakurajima, there was still no response.

However, I always felt that she noticed my presence.

Testimonials and rewards

It's going to be on the shelves soon, and I don't know what to say about the testimonials on the shelves.

Just let me say casually, and you can listen casually.

The most important thing is to be happy.

As a newcomer author, I seem to have stepped on all the pits that should not be stepped on when writing a book.

Well~ it's just a test pen.

As far as I know about some of the problems in this book, I will probably explain them here (maybe incompletely)

First, there is the question of names.

I know that the most taboo thing about writing online articles is No.1 saying that it is impossible to write well without a certain amount of writing skills.I did suffer a bit from this.

If you use the first perspective, many things can only be told from the perspective of the protagonist, which will make it impossible to express the thoughts of other characters, or in other words, require clever ideas to express.

If it is not well grasped, it will also create a riddleman phenomenon, which will make readers feel a little uncomfortable.

This has caused a lot of obstacles to my code words and conception of the plot.

Another point is that if you use the first-person perspective, if the writing style is not good, it will cause an awkward feeling of reading.

I have encountered all these problems, but I still chose the first perspective, because only the first perspective is enough.

In order to avoid some of the above problems, I also tried to use the interspersed writing method of the first and third perspectives, but it seems that the effect is really not working.

Generally speaking, my writing skills are not good enough, so it should be regarded as my writing skills.

Second, the personality of the hero.

Here I will explain. (Actually, it would be boring to explain this kind of question. It’s okay if you don’t listen to my explanation, just follow your own understanding)

First of all, the hero has the ability and character of the four bullies on campus, but not all of them have it.

I have written it very clearly in my introduction, I just follow the four doctrines, and the hero is still an independent personality.

Third, system problems.

In fact, the system I wrote is just a tool to promote the development of the plot, otherwise, according to the character and ability of the hero, the plot will not develop at all.

The system is not very useful in the whole novel. I write daily novels, why do I need a system that is very useful?

Because of the system, in the later stage of the novel, he directly became an all-round male protagonist, wouldn't that be boring?

Finally, there are some small problems, I will not list them one by one.

When writing novels, there are problems. In fact, it is generally a problem of writing.

This novel should be regarded as my own writing practice.

In fact, I also understand that it is no longer popular in daily life.

Compared with those cool articles, it is much more difficult to write well in daily life.

But I still plan to write down the daily life, because I like the process of slowly digging out the inner thoughts of each character.