Waiting for the manager's coffee

This is my first complete novel.It frustrates me a bit. I thought well, but I couldn't write well.The original setting is shorter and the plot is simpler.But after rambling on and on, it was drawn to such an embarrassing length.I am satisfied with the characters, and I am satisfied with the cuteness, but maybe they are not eye-catching.At least, it's an entertaining story to watch.The next story happened between the fresh meat of the Hallyu Tiantuan. CP: Liang Jin: Don't think that I am a gentle and considerate man because I look noble and glamorous. A Match Made in Heaven Sweet Wen Entertainment ┃ Search keywords: Protagonist: Lin Mu, Liang Jin ┃ Supporting roles: Tang Ning, Lan Fan