Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?

Seeing "Parasite" ranked seventh on the love list, countless netizens began to mock the model crazily.

[what happened? I think the newly released Makiko is indeed good, but why is she on the love list? ]

[Are there any laws of heaven? Are there any laws? Such a bloody comic actually made it onto the list of romance comics? ]

[Yahoo Comics is over, this is simply a shameful scene that can go down in history! ]

[Is "Parasite" too awesome, or is it that its peers are too disappointing? ]

[How bad are the romance comics on the market now? ]

There are also many netizens who are afraid that the world will not be in chaos and continue to vote for "Parasite" to ensure that it does not slip down the love list.

At this time, Oda Shingo was still in the workroom, looking at countless scrapped drafts with emotion.

After several months of cartoon drawing, he has combined the experience of his previous life with the level of the original comic, and even made significant modifications based on market conditions.

The "Parasite" in this world cannot be said to be perfect, but it has indeed strived for excellence and made significant corrections to the plot of the original work that was delayed due to deadlines.

Namikaze Yukaku helped sort out the manuscript, paused lightly on the table, and asked with great regret: "Oda-sensei, the nearly one hundred pages of story plots are just abandoned like this?"

"This is to ensure the high-speed rhythm of the plot. Although it can be published, the rhythm will not be tight enough." Oda Shingo also felt distressed.

At the beginning, he drew hundreds of pages of drafts according to the original work, but then he felt that the hospital stage was too long-winded. In fact, it only took 20 pages to complete.

After checking the completeness of the emotional foreshadowing of the characters, he determined that there was no problem in streamlining it.

It is estimated that the original work is so "watery" in this part because the author has not thought of how to deal with the parasitic mother yet.

Therefore, the original author, Teacher Yanming, used about two chapters of daily life to give himself about half a month of thinking buffer time.

He knew that the original author's treatment here was that the plot needed time to buffer. However, this kind of daily content is no longer suitable for the taste of today's market in the face of increasingly picky comic fans.

Although with the popularity of "Parasite". One or two words on the water is not a problem, and it is also the daily routine of many manga authors, but Oda Shingo does not allow himself to do this.

"Alas, is there anyone in the world who wastes storyboards like me?" Oda Shingo was about to cry without tears.

Not only does he feel bad about time, he also feels bad about money. The manuscript fee paid by Qunyingsha is very high. It is calculated based on the page number. These dozens of pages are worth 200,000 to 300,000 yen.

Fortunately, Oda Shingo only drew a draft and made cuts after storyboarding it, which did not affect Namikaze Yukaku Hakuga.

Namikaze Yukaku had been quietly watching his expression, and at this moment he understood that Oda Shingo was still reluctant to part with him.

"Oda-kun, these manuscripts are like... you also feel it is a pity, right? Why not make them a side story?" Namikaze Yukaku asked.

These manuscripts are like our children, we can’t bear to abandon them, right? Namikaze Youkaku almost said this just now.

She felt very embarrassed and opened her mouth but did not continue. Don't mention sensitive topics like children, just count the paintings. After all, these are just paintings by Oda Shingo, and I didn't help much.

"Huh? What a great idea!" Oda Shingo simply put the deleted draft in the writer's column.

If Oda Shingo knew this little thought of Namikaze Yukaku, he would probably laugh out loud: The only child I have to work with is Cao Chong, not Cao Pi.

At this time, Mrs. Yukino was already optimistic about the manuscript for the next issue, and felt that there was no way to change it. She couldn't help but sigh: "Mr. Oda, the number one on the list you are looking forward to may be achieved in just one or two issues!"

"No, I'm a very low-key person. I'm not in a hurry to be ranked number one." Oda Shingo curled his lips and told lies, acting as the God of War with a crooked mouth.

Mrs. Yukino just smiled and looked at him without criticizing him.

At this time, Toudo Kaori suddenly pointed at the screen and shouted: "Oh, Oda-sensei, "Parasite" is on Yahoo Comics' love list! This is not Yahoo's official evaluation, but the result of netizen voting!"

Oda Shingo: "Huh?"

He walked over and looked at the screen, and Toudo Xiangcheng pointed at the screen.

But as soon as Oda Shingo came over, he felt that the white flowers were too dazzling...

Still not watching. Oda Shingo returned soon.

This girl, the temperature in the air-conditioned room is not high, why are you wearing clothes with such a big open collar... This is your workplace.

Oda Shingo murmured in his heart.

Look at Mrs. Yukino, even in the middle of summer, she is still wearing a kimono, as if she is not afraid of the heat.

In fact, he didn't know that Todo Xiangcheng only dressed like at home when he was here.

And Mrs. Yukino is also in a special situation. With her physique, the less she wears in summer, the hotter she gets.

"Oda-kun, when I was watching this plot, I felt that you were very good at writing about love." Namikaze Yukaku suddenly said.

Todo Kouchi echoed: "Yes, I felt the same way when I was drawing the background. Oda-sensei also asked me not to draw a background that was too clear, so as not to overwhelm the female character and affect the perception of the female character. I didn't expect that he understood it quite well."

Mrs. Yukino picked up the teacup and took a sip, then said quietly, "He understands love...that's weird!"

"..." After hearing this, Namikaze Yukaku and Toudo Kaori also stared at Oda Shingo for a long time.

Then……

"snort--!"

The two women suddenly turned their heads away from him in unison.

Oda Shingo: "???"

What's wrong with you? Why are you so angry?

Did I not pay you wages or did I take advantage of you?

Oda Shingo wanted to snort.

No matter what, women will be unhappy for a few days every month. Oda Shingo found a reason to numb himself and still concentrate on drawing comics.

The next plot is not a climax, but it is meaningful to the protagonist.

Even though Mrs. Yukino can't find any faults after reading it as a comic fan, Oda Shingo is serious and keeps polishing the new chapters of the comic.

But now, he is in a dilemma.

In the adapted and upcoming comic plot, Izumi Shinichi decisively killed the parasitic beast that killed his mother with his strong physical fitness after merging with the parasitic beast.

In order to enter this plot as soon as possible, he deleted a lot of scenes between the protagonist and the supporting role.

The advantage of doing this is that it is very in line with the fast pace of the market, but the experienced Oda Shingo always feels that something is wrong!

He read the manuscript over and over again, what is the problem?

Fast is the mainstream of the current market. Why did I speed up the pace and cut off many daily contents of the original work, but I became uneasy in my heart?

He flipped through the manuscript again and again, but he couldn't find the problem.

"Mrs. Yukino, I think there are defects in this part of the drawing. Do you feel it?"

Mrs. Yukino was stunned: "Defects? I didn't find it."

In the current new version, the protagonist's behavior is smooth and natural, and the performance is also quite handsome.

Even Mrs. Yukino didn't see the problem.

"Am I too sensitive?"

Mrs. Yukino looked at him quietly for a long time.

Then, Mrs. Yukino looked out the window.

It was getting dark.

She stood up and glanced at it. After confirming that the two women were facing away, she made a number nine to Oda Shingo with both hands, and then raised her thumb and little finger to make a phone gesture.

Oda Shingo was stunned.

Mrs. Yukino smiled intriguingly and left gracefully.