Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?

Huahuahuahuahua——

Oda Shingo kept flipping through the draft, his eyes scanning it quickly like a scanner.

From the moment when Izumi Shinichi rushed to the beach to the moment when he looked at the decay of the parasite and the remains of his mother, there must be something wrong with this part!

This is an intuition, but I just can't see where the problem is!

It's just a weird feeling. Although the plot is very exciting, it's not right.

Oda Shingo sent the new draft to Mikami Saburo and Assistant Okita.

Feedback came back quickly.

[Teacher Oda's works are always of high quality! ] Assistant Okita is already a little fan.

Mikami Saburo also made it clear: [Shingo, you may surpass the first place "notouch" in the previous issue this time! ]

Even though Oda Shingo said that there seemed to be a problem, the two still felt that the plot was smooth and the excitement was sufficient, so there was no problem.

Despite hearing them say this with experience, Oda Shingo still felt a knot in his heart.

From the afternoon to around eight o'clock, he was stuck on the part where the protagonist Izumi Shinichi exploded and killed the parasitic beast killer.

But the more impatient Oda Shingo was, the less he could find the problem!

Namikaze Yukaku and Fujido Kaoru each looked at him secretly.

Oda Shingo scratched his hair in annoyance.

I clearly saw that there was a problem with the original work, but why did I still vaguely feel that there was a problem after the adaptation?

Oda Shingo believed in his intuition.

This is the experience gained from many years of work. If you feel that there is a problem somewhere, then there must be a problem, but it is covered by something and cannot be found for the time being.

As the sky gradually darkened, after Mrs. Yukino left, he gradually became impatient.

Ta.

The sound of a teacup was soft, it was Namikaze Yukaku.

"Have a glass of watermelon juice." Namikaze Yukaku opened a fruit drink for Oda Shingo while Fujido Kasumi went to the bathroom. "I heard from my father that watermelons in China are called cold melons, which can calm the mind."

"Ah, thank you." Oda Shingo felt much better when he heard the Japanese respect for China.

This is a sense of pride from the glory of the motherland.

"I have finished the detailed drawing work today, and I will take a look." Namikaze Yukaku sat next to Oda Shingo, "I have been looking at this part of the plot. Is there really a problem?"

"I feel there is a problem, but I don't know where it is." Oda Shingo sighed.

Namikaze Yukaku did not speak, and read the manuscript again.

Oda Shingo drank the watermelon juice quietly, closed his eyes and calmed his mind.

Combining the feeling of reading comics for many years, Namikaze Yukaku still did not think there was a problem after revisiting the manuscript.

The protagonist is decisive in killing. After making a mistake and almost losing his life, he can always protect his father with a firm will, and revenge for his mother is clean and neat. He is a typical perfect protagonist.

After thinking about it, Namikaze Yuzuru said seriously: "I can't see the problem. I think both the picture and the character's personality are well portrayed. And the way he gets angry after his new friend is hurt is quite handsome."

At this time, the sound of the faucet in the bathroom came faintly, and Namikaze Yuzuru got up and returned to his seat.

Nearing nine o'clock, Oda Shingo announced that today's work would end here.

He got up and went back to the room.

When it was nine o'clock, he took out his mobile phone and started calling Mrs. Yukino.

This was what Mrs. Yukino hinted to him before she left.

"Oda-kun is really punctual. Are you counting the clock waiting to call me?" Mrs. Yukino's gentle voice came from the phone.

Oda Shingo did not answer, but just said: "Madam, you answered the phone very quickly."

Mrs. Yukino chuckled, and also did not explain, but asked Oda Shingo: "Pull open the curtains first, open the window and see if there is anyone on the wall outside the window?"

Oda Shingo: "?"

He quickly understood what Mrs. Yukino meant.

"Hamikaze Yukaku is not here." Oda Shingo said on the phone, then took the initiative to go to the door, gently pushed the door, and looked outside the door. There was no one, "Toudou Kaoshi is not at the door either."

The possible female ninja prying through the window and the female man eavesdropping with a cup on the door did not exist.

"Haha, Mr. Oda's mind works very quickly." Mrs. Yukino spoke briskly, "What is Mr. Oda wearing now? He still wears the same pajamas as during the day, and he hasn't changed."

Oda Shingo said anxiously: "Hey, Mrs. Yukino, don't beat around the bush. You have figured out what I was worried about during the day, right?"

Mrs. Yukino said slowly: "Your deadline is the day after tomorrow, why are you in such a hurry?"

Her voice is pleasant to the ear, and she speaks so slowly and softly, with an inexplicable coquettish flavor that makes people feel numb.

"Please, tell me quickly, I'm impatient."

"But I'm not impatient, forget it, I won't tease you, but I can't be completely sure, I can only give you a hint." Mrs. Yukino knows how to judge the scale very well, and she began to speak seriously: "As a senior comic fan who has read many comic works, the problem I can't see is probably related to my lack of expertise."

"Huh? What is Mrs. Yukino not good at?"

"There are many things I am not good at, but the one related to this matter is probably... human feelings."

"Ah?" Oda Shingo was stunned.

This part of my plot does not involve love, right?

"This is a hint, Oda-kun, think about it yourself, I'm going to hang up the phone." Mrs. Yukino's words became brisk again.

"Hey, this is not a hint." Oda Shingo hurriedly coaxed.

Mrs. Yukino was silent for a few seconds, and suddenly said: "Oda-kun, have you heard a Kansai proverb? [The problem that smart people can't figure out, fools usually have the answer.]"

"Hey?"

"I'm going to take a shower."

"Drink more hot water... No, good night, Mrs. Yukino." Oda Shingo habitually replied to the conversation between the dog and the goddess.

After hanging up the phone, Oda Shingo was stunned for a long time.

[The problem that smart people can't figure out, fools usually have the answer. ]

Mrs. Yukino means that she is a smart person, and I am also a smart person, Oda Shingo thought.

Then the fool is...

Thinking of this, Oda Shingo touched his chin and opened the door, looking at the door of Fujido Kaoru's room.

No, Mrs. Yukino just reminded me to guard against Namikaze Yukaku eavesdropping.

He closed the door gently again.

Took out the mobile phone and called Fujido Kaoru.

Fujido Kaoru answered the phone quickly, obviously playing with her phone: "What the hell? Teacher Oda, is there any urgent public opinion? I'll send 100,000 navy soldiers to deal with it!"

She spoke in a loud voice, full of energy.

Oda Shingo naturally couldn't say he was asking a fool for advice: "Um...are you free? Can I come over and talk?"

"..."Fudo Kaoru's phone suddenly went quiet.

But Oda Shingo could clearly hear the nervous breathing in the microphone.

After a long while, Fujido Kaoru's mosquito-like voice came from the microphone: "You have to sign the marriage agreement before you can..."

The marriage agreement is the document submitted by Japanese citizens to the Civil Affairs District Office to apply for marriage.

Oda Shingo: "..."